So far from the bamboo grove
the main character now is ko shes a small child and shes 7 years old .yoko is her sister and ko's father
is an government official. Her dad becomes a problem for them becaues it offects them later in the story.
Ex: page 2 and the middle and end pargarph.
yoko is very nice to her sister and they get along very well so far.ko calls her sister honoarbol sister and her brother honoarbol brother to.
Ex:page 48 the first and middle pargarph.
Ko's family reacts nice to strangers becaues of her mom.
Ex:page 49 the hall page
4 comments:
Christian, glad to see you off to a good start by doing your first post on time!:) Please remember next time to title your response with the OP or CO #1, or whichever one it is. Also, make sure to number responses for each question so they are easy for your group to comment on. Thanks.
1)Great Job, But you should explain more facts about Ko in the 1 question. Like how she was really nice and generous to the people on board the train.
PS. I could not find the 2 and 3 answers to Ms. Interlandi's question. Also use spell check because I found some words that were spelled wrong. =D
1. I think you mixed up Ko and Yoko. Yoko is the younger one, and Ko is the older one. Anywho, you should write more about what kind of character Yoko is.
2. I like how you said that they're nice and they get along, but sometimes they don't really get along. So I think that you could of pointed that out.
3. Ko's family does react nice to the strangers, but I don't think it's because of her Mom. I think that their Mom wants them to act nice to them, but they have good manners like that anyways.
Yeah, I agree with Charisse I think you mixed up Ko and Yoko. Other than that I agree with you that Yoko and Ko get along (most of the time). Great Job! ~ Sofia
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